The Candle

the candle was burning bright,
in d world which itself wasn't right!
nothing it had known, nothing it had learnt
it had come to the world..jus to get burnt!
it had been burning fr a long time,
it was like a punishment..w/out committing a crime!
it cudn't hear, it cudn't talk..
it cudn't run,it cudn't walk..
it only work,
was to get burnt- more n more
until death comes to its door!!
(it won sm international contests n was written by me long back...its my perception of life.)

3 comments:

  1. wow!!!
    ur a really good writer...
    hw can sum 1 b sooo good at it?
    u rock!!!

    keep it going buds!!!
    GOD BLESS!!!

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  2. nice:)
    A different perspective.

    Keep it rollin;)

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  3. priyank - this was written by me long back. thx. keep visiting.
    Scribbler - thanks a lot. just my thoughts!

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